Teacher feedback

After our teacher looked at our rough cut they told us that we used a lot of really nice midshots and close ups however some of our long shots did not fit into place, they also said that our shadow clip was too long and that we must have a background for our green screen and lastly that we need to make it lead into her singing dont go stright into the face. all of the advice that they told us we already thought of them and we all knew about all the things we needed to change so it was nice to hear that we had it right and you what our aim was.