- Charlotte's performance was well done
- Good use of green screen
- Variety of shots good use of close ups as it is of indie pop genre
- Great Editing to the beat
- Strong narrative
- Choreography suited song in video so did props
- locations not typical from our genre, autumnal vibe despite the song being happy
- Misc en scene didn't look right
- colourful. use of animation and speech bubble effective
After the cinema screening a lot of our feedback was positive they all liked the green screen and thought the person in the video performed it well however some of the less postive was that we challenged the covention of indie pop with two of our shots the shadow shot and the studio shot they said that it was too dark and did not link to our bright and colourful other shots however when doing it we thought it was to show her different side and her self as she is but i guess after the feedback i still would want to show it but in a different way. So yes i agree that you dont find these kind of shots in indie pop genre so maybe we should of added coulours in the background to make it fit in.
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